上篇：文章结构用词表达

　　1.分点一：分层论证

　　Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from_______ is that__________/ First and foremost;

　　On one hand_________， On the other hand_________;

　　Besides/ Whats more/ In addition;

　　First of all/to begin with/above all;

　　In the second place/in the second instance;

　　Last but not least/in summary;

　　这一段主要说理，在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节，重点是要用一些精华句子!

　　2.分点二：举例论证

　　Further lending credence to my position is that____________ (简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)

　　/I can think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子)

　　/ A case in point is that(不是很典型)________，some expert pionts out that

　　/take in instance

　　/according to the investigation conducted this year indicates that/(推荐，为神马，因为句子长，废话多 )

　　some statistics expose that

　　一句话总结例子：As a result，强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样。

　　3.让步段

　　Agree or disagree： Admittedly，_____，to some extent， may directly or indirectly ____ /has its undeniable detriments.

　　For instance， _______

　　However， the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./

　　(经典正反对比结构)

　　二选一：Admittedly， BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example， ____(字数不够就多讲点)

　　However，BB 的缺点或AA也可以做到。 Compared with AA， (which 可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面， )it pales.

　　4.结尾段

　　Therefore， due to the above mentioned reasons， which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them(字不够了用)， I reinforce my stand point that.

　　5.改写题目

　　Only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________;

　　only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we________;

　　and only via(by/through /with/when/after)___can we_______

　　Or

　　It is A thatit is A thatand it is A that(不好写或显得累赘就不要了)

　　上篇：文章结构用词表达

　　1.分点一：分层论证

　　Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from_______ is that__________/ First and foremost;

　　On one hand_________， On the other hand_________;

　　Besides/ Whats more/ In addition;

　　First of all/to begin with/above all;

　　In the second place/in the second instance;

　　Last but not least/in summary;

　　这一段主要说理，在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节，重点是要用一些精华句子!

　　2.分点二：举例论证

　　Further lending credence to my position is that____________ (简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)

　　/I can think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子)

　　/ A case in point is that(不是很典型)________，some expert pionts out that

　　/take in instance

　　/according to the investigation conducted this year indicates that/(推荐，为神马，因为句子长，废话多 )

　　some statistics expose that

　　一句话总结例子：As a result，强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样。

　　3.让步段

　　Agree or disagree： Admittedly，_____，to some extent， may directly or indirectly ____ /has its undeniable detriments.

　　For instance， _______

　　However， the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./

　　(经典正反对比结构)

　　二选一：Admittedly， BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example， ____(字数不够就多讲点)

　　However，BB 的缺点或AA也可以做到。 Compared with AA， (which 可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面， )it pales.

　　4.结尾段

　　Therefore， due to the above mentioned reasons， which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them(字不够了用)， I reinforce my stand point that.

　　5.改写题目

　　Only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________;

　　only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we________;

　　and only via(by/through /with/when/after)___can we_______

　　Or

　　It is A thatit is A thatand it is A that(不好写或显得累赘就不要了)