写作训练(二)

　　(2024·黑龙江省哈师大附中高三第三次月考)

　　假设你是李华，几天前你从某国外网站购买一支录音笔，现在你发电子邮件到该网站反应以下问题：

　　1．音质不太清楚；2.操作不简便：3.经常出问题。

　　期待的解决办法：1.退货退款；2.修理或调换。

　　注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数；

　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．参考词汇：录音笔 recording pen。

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　答案：

　　写作训练(二)

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　I’m writing to tell you something about the recording pen I bought from your website several days ago. There seems to be something wrong with it. First，the voice isn’t so clear as you claimed. Second，it’s not easy to operate，which caused me much trouble. Third，it often breaks down，while a recording pen at such a price shouldn’t have had so many problems.

　　Due to its poor quality and much inconvenience it has caused，I wonder whether you can do something about it. I would appreciate it very much if I can get my money back and I’ll send it back to you as soon as you return the money to me. If it can’t be helped，I wish you could have it repaired or changed.

　　I’m looking forward to your early reply.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　写作训练(二)

　　(2024·黑龙江省哈师大附中高三第三次月考)

　　假设你是李华，几天前你从某国外网站购买一支录音笔，现在你发电子邮件到该网站反应以下问题：

　　1．音质不太清楚；2.操作不简便：3.经常出问题。

　　期待的解决办法：1.退货退款；2.修理或调换。

　　注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数；

　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．参考词汇：录音笔 recording pen。

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　答案：

　　写作训练(二)

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　I’m writing to tell you something about the recording pen I bought from your website several days ago. There seems to be something wrong with it. First，the voice isn’t so clear as you claimed. Second，it’s not easy to operate，which caused me much trouble. Third，it often breaks down，while a recording pen at such a price shouldn’t have had so many problems.

　　Due to its poor quality and much inconvenience it has caused，I wonder whether you can do something about it. I would appreciate it very much if I can get my money back and I’ll send it back to you as soon as you return the money to me. If it can’t be helped，I wish you could have it repaired or changed.

　　I’m looking forward to your early reply.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua