2024届高考英语一轮复习全方位配套训练人教版必修一Unit 5 Nelson Mandela--a modern hero短文改错2

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Passage 1 （2024·辽宁高考）

　　Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work have made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthy.We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picture we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

　　答案：

　　Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time

　　his work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work

　　made him very ill.“He has ruined his .We are worried about him.?That is i other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside

　　room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the

　　we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as

　　as we missed him.

　　Passage 2

　?。?024·浙江高考）

　　Dear Diary，

　　Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring,but I know I’ll never fall sleep.

　　Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.

　　Yours，

　　Rosemary

　　答案：

　　Dear Diary，

　　Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we

　　last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find

　　one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my ,my school

　　just everything else I love in the world.To make matters ,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully ,but I know I’ll never fall .

　　Good night and remember，you,dear diary, my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.

　　Yours，

　　Rosemary

　　2024届高考英语一轮复习全方位配套训练人教版必修一Unit 5 Nelson Mandela--a modern hero短文改错2

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Passage 1 （2024·辽宁高考）

　　Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work have made him very ill.“He has ruined his healthy.We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the picture we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.

　　答案：

　　Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher.Every day,he spends too much time

　　his work.With little sleep and hardly any break,so he works from morning till night.Hard work

　　made him very ill.“He has ruined his .We are worried about him.?That is i other teachers say.Yesterday afternoon,I paid visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside

　　room I stopped.I had to calm myself down.Quietly I into the room.I saw him lying in bed,looking at some of the

　　we had taken together.I understood that he missed us just as

　　as we missed him.

　　Passage 2

　?。?024·浙江高考）

　　Dear Diary，

　　Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate,my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring,but I know I’ll never fall sleep.

　　Good night and remember,you,dear diary,is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.

　　Yours，

　　Rosemary

　　答案：

　　Dear Diary，

　　Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse.Do you want to know why we

　　last week?Dad lost his job,and as Mom explained,“He was lucky to find

　　one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my ,my school

　　just everything else I love in the world.To make matters ,now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully ,but I know I’ll never fall .

　　Good night and remember，you,dear diary, my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.

　　Yours，

　　Rosemary