详解雅思写作的“黄金结构”

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详解雅思写作的“黄金结构”

　　雅思考试课堂写作讲义1+2+3+4课

　　1st

　　2nd：

　　黄金结构的诞生

　　Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think students only need to get primary education, while others think secondary education is necessary. Whats your opinion?

　　More serious unemployment across the world cannot be denied.There are probably many reasons for this, but the main reason is the limited knowledge or skills of some workers.It seems that most of employers prefer the employees who have had enough information along with skills to the people who earn a living at the cost of physical labors.

　　I would like to say that children should be encouraged to accept more secondary and even higher education.It is well aware that a good education can improve their quality and competitiveness . Because many students have been given high-quality education or useful training, they have had more opportunities to get in some reputable companies or Government departments.Furthermore, most of them are more likely to get promoted and development in the end.

　　However, other people argue that students only need to get primary education.They probably think that children cannot find a job even when they get in higher education.However,the students cannot take advantage with the people who have had a good education if they do not get more education. Knowledge and education seems to be the key to find a good job in the society that is competitive.

　　In conclusion, I would like to express that we should encourage children to have more education in very serious environment of unemployment rather than to allow them to drop studying any more. Besides, I think that the Government should set up more training classes free of charge to help more people who are in unemployment, for current problem is not less job opportunity but limited about qualified workers.

　　练习用黄金结构布局文章

　　A long-distance flight consumes the fuel as much as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon the non-essential fights , and it is more efficient than restricting the car use. Give your opinion about it.

　　实现黄金结构的语言设计

　　描述事实

　　It is true that...

　　We can easily find it prevalent that ...

　　给出主要观点

　　给出次要观点

　　Some people argue that...

　　Some people hold the statement that...

　　It is said that...

　　总结上面的主次观点

　　In conclusion, I would like to say that...

　　Overall, my view is that...

　　3rd：

　　分论点的支持句-例子和事实支持的组织方法

　　a)used的妙用: 古今对比

　　新式建筑给予了人们很多好的不能被老式建筑所提供的特性。在过去，由于城市人口较少，因此一座房子往往不需要容纳很多人。但是，随着城市人口的增加，新式的房子能够容纳更多的住客。

　　b)while的妙用: 人无我有,人有我优

　　学生们应该被鼓励在学校学习一门外语。那些在初中或高中就熟练使用外语的学生无论是进入大学还是直接工作都受到了欢迎，但是没有这些技能的学生却不得不面对很多困难。

　　c)It is widely acknowledge that 众所周知

　　将罪犯关入监狱的好处就是让人们更安心的生活。众所周知，关押在监狱的犯人受到非常严格的监视和管理，并且不能再继续犯罪危害社会。

　　4th：

　　1、常见名词

　?、僭颉⒁蛩?/p>

　?、诜⒄?、进展

　?、塾诺恪⒂攀?/p>

　?、苋钡?、不利

　?、菪枰⑿枨?/p>

　?、薰鄣?、论点

　　2、常见动词

　?、俨?、导致

　　②获得

　?、凼迪?/p>

　?、芫?/p>

　　⑤支持观点/be for/convince/insist/voice a support for/vote for)

　?、薹炊怨鄣?disregard/oppose)

　　3、常见形容词

　　①重要的

　?、谟幸娴?/p>

　?、塾泻Φ?/p>

　　④吸引人的

　?、莺芏嗟?/p>

　　⑥很多的 amount of/a magnitude of/a mass of)

　　4、常见副词

　?、俜浅５?/p>

　?、诩俚?/p>

　?、奂负醪?/p>

　　Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people, but others think the purpose of museums is to educate, but not entertain.

　　What is your opinion?

　　博物馆在世界各地都是非常受欢迎的场所。我完全同意博物馆应该是一个吸引年轻参观者的场所。原因在于：现在的博物馆需要更多的手段来吸引参观者，这样它们才能够更好的发展和生存。

　　第二个更主要的原因是：今天的参观者对于娱乐性有很高的要求。例子：对于那些增加了娱乐服务的博物馆比如：3D电影或是互动节目，他们的参观数量和大众的口碑要远远好于那些仍旧以旧的方式进行运作的博物馆。在那些博物馆中，展品被简单的摆在玻璃罩字后面，枯燥的文字让人们无法阅读。

　　另一些人指出：博物馆的主要作用是教育，而不是娱乐。他们始终认为人们来到这里是一个很好的学习的机会，增长知识。这种想法是非常正确的。因为娱乐仅仅是工具而不是目的。

　　综上所述，我认为博物馆的形式应该更加多样化。与此同时博物馆的作用不容改变，就是教育。娱乐工具的引入是非常有必要的。特别是对于那些需要知识，但同时需要娱乐的年轻人。