浙江省2024高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　下面短文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

　　例如：It was very nice to get invitation to spend ?∧ ?weekend with you. Luckily

　　the

　　I was?completely free then, so I’ll

　　to? say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at

　　? am

　　?around 8 pm in? Friday evening.

　　on

　　My favourite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience. Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often unless we want to win the game.

　　第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

　　在繁重的课业负担之下，中学生也应该学会适度地自我放松，请你围绕“Ways to get relaxed”这一话题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：

　　1、自我放松的途径：看电视、体育锻炼、上网等

　　2、我更喜欢的途径及理由：……

　　注意:

　　在表达“我更喜欢的途径及理由”时,请从要点1中选择一项进行阐述。

　　词数：100—120，文章开头已给出（不计词数）。

　　There are various ways to get relaxed for middle school students.

　　改错1．将was改为am。2．去掉for。3．将match改为matches。4．将Play改为Playing。5．将give改为gives。6．instead后加of。7．important改为importance。8．在captain前加the。9．将they改为we。10. unless--if

　　作文

　　One way is to take exercise, walking, running, playing basketball or football, etc. We can also watch TV, where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful programs both in Chinese and English as well. Moreover, we can surf the Internet to get some relaxation and entertainment.

　　??? As far as I’m concerned/ As for me, surfing the Internet appeals to me most. For one thing, the Internet offers a wide range of activities for relaxation. In general, I keep track of the latest news as an enjoyment. Sometimes, I play computer games to refresh myself. For another, the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people at home and abroad, for it is a great joy to communicate with them. In addition, having a glimpse of the vivid pictures and live videos on the Internet contributes to regaining my energy.

　　浙江省2024高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　下面短文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

　　例如：It was very nice to get invitation to spend ?∧ ?weekend with you. Luckily

　　the

　　I was?completely free then, so I’ll

　　to? say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at

　　? am

　　?around 8 pm in? Friday evening.

　　on

　　My favourite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience. Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often unless we want to win the game.

　　第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

　　在繁重的课业负担之下，中学生也应该学会适度地自我放松，请你围绕“Ways to get relaxed”这一话题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：

　　1、自我放松的途径：看电视、体育锻炼、上网等

　　2、我更喜欢的途径及理由：……

　　注意:

　　在表达“我更喜欢的途径及理由”时,请从要点1中选择一项进行阐述。

　　词数：100—120，文章开头已给出（不计词数）。

　　There are various ways to get relaxed for middle school students.

　　改错1．将was改为am。2．去掉for。3．将match改为matches。4．将Play改为Playing。5．将give改为gives。6．instead后加of。7．important改为importance。8．在captain前加the。9．将they改为we。10. unless--if

　　作文

　　One way is to take exercise, walking, running, playing basketball or football, etc. We can also watch TV, where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful programs both in Chinese and English as well. Moreover, we can surf the Internet to get some relaxation and entertainment.

　　??? As far as I’m concerned/ As for me, surfing the Internet appeals to me most. For one thing, the Internet offers a wide range of activities for relaxation. In general, I keep track of the latest news as an enjoyment. Sometimes, I play computer games to refresh myself. For another, the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people at home and abroad, for it is a great joy to communicate with them. In addition, having a glimpse of the vivid pictures and live videos on the Internet contributes to regaining my energy.